Conversation using informal words/phrases then re-worded to use formal words/phrases

This proposal to the committee includes some idea about (1) what is in the first edition. (2) Thinking about the secretary's suggestions (3) and some ideas from other committee members.I believe that the first edition should contain (4) different subjects to attract the interest of all its readers.First of all we could include interviews with famous sports (5) people like David Beckham the English footballer. I also (6) thought of Roger Federer, the famous tennis player, but unfortunately he (7) did not accept my invitation due to his (8) job. However he offered to (9) give one of his tennis racquets as a competition prize in our magazine.Note: the 2nd version replaces those phrases 1-9 with the following :- 1 the contents of- 2 taking into consideration- 3 as well as- 4 a wide range of- 5 personalities- 6 had in mind- 7 declined- 8 professional responsibilities- 9 donate Voir Acast.com/privacy pour les informations sur la vie privée et l'opt-out. Hébergé par Acast. Visitez acast.com/privacy pour plus d'informations.